This is the review I got this morning for the SPN fanfic I posted on fanfiction.net:
Oh my god. This was as beautiful~ Seriously, I read yaoi and stuff like this
all the time but never, ever have I read an author write anything this
captivating. Even in normal books I can never quite get a picture in my head
of whats actually happening but your writing plays out like a movie, every
detail perfect and flowing like stories ought to be.
I read the story before this, "Look in My Tormented Eye" and was in love with
the idea of Gabriel and Sam being together from the instant Sam touched
Gabriel's hand. I actually was a big RubyXSam fan till the last episode of the
fourth season but I must compliment you on how you dealed with Sam and Ruby's
relationship. Most authors would have left her out or slandered her character
to the point where it was completely ridicous or came up with some way of
killing of her character. I also appreciate how you kept the characters in
character, not simply having them ooc and bang in the bathroom like wild
animals. I was considering not reading anymore fanfiction because of ooc but
your stories have made me reconsider.
Lastly I would like to thank you for creating a character of your own that
was not only easy to like but for giving him reasonable limitations and
keeping his skills and abilites that of the same as Castiel. Please continue
to write.
My favorite parts? That the stories read like movies (because I see them as movies). And that apparently I have single-handedly redeemed an entire area of human endeavor.
My work here is done!
Oh my god. This was as beautiful~ Seriously, I read yaoi and stuff like this
all the time but never, ever have I read an author write anything this
captivating. Even in normal books I can never quite get a picture in my head
of whats actually happening but your writing plays out like a movie, every
detail perfect and flowing like stories ought to be.
I read the story before this, "Look in My Tormented Eye" and was in love with
the idea of Gabriel and Sam being together from the instant Sam touched
Gabriel's hand. I actually was a big RubyXSam fan till the last episode of the
fourth season but I must compliment you on how you dealed with Sam and Ruby's
relationship. Most authors would have left her out or slandered her character
to the point where it was completely ridicous or came up with some way of
killing of her character. I also appreciate how you kept the characters in
character, not simply having them ooc and bang in the bathroom like wild
animals. I was considering not reading anymore fanfiction because of ooc but
your stories have made me reconsider.
Lastly I would like to thank you for creating a character of your own that
was not only easy to like but for giving him reasonable limitations and
keeping his skills and abilites that of the same as Castiel. Please continue
to write.
My favorite parts? That the stories read like movies (because I see them as movies). And that apparently I have single-handedly redeemed an entire area of human endeavor.
My work here is done!


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